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Editing is nice.

The video is enticing to the storyline, and the editing is fairly understandable. It seems to me that you would benefit from taking a life drawing class, because you have your characters' images down, but the drawing level is still at an early stage. There are also how-to drawing books at local art stores. I think you have a lot of potential, and this advice isn't to put you down. I only spend this much time commenting to somebody whom I think could end up being a really good artist and storyteller. :)

tgvulture08 responds:

Thankyouu. ^^ Yes I admit the level of my art is not striking. :( Actually I do want to take classes on flash but I can't because I have to focus more on my studies. :( So I have no choice but to use everything I have and create this because the story keeps on bothering me. Haha. But thank you very much on your advice. ^^

Fun stuff.

I wanted to hate this but I kept watching and am a little happier for it. :)
The only picky thing I have to say is the black lines on his fur are a bit distracting. I think the llama could do without it. Otherwise, fun video!

Kotzman responds:

those darn black lines arghhh, but thankss

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