Lizards ARE great!
The lizard is so lovable even though it hardly does anything. I like the mysterious plot, and the music works fantastically and is very unique- it may have even carried this video somewhat.
I think this about a lot of flash submissions on NG, but I'll mention it on yours because it may really benefit your future videos: Have you thought about painting your backgrounds, or getting a skilled painter to do it? Since the film relies so much on landscape and space shots, nicely painted backgrounds could make it that much more engaging. Wanting to see more from you!
Editing is nice.
The video is enticing to the storyline, and the editing is fairly understandable. It seems to me that you would benefit from taking a life drawing class, because you have your characters' images down, but the drawing level is still at an early stage. There are also how-to drawing books at local art stores. I think you have a lot of potential, and this advice isn't to put you down. I only spend this much time commenting to somebody whom I think could end up being a really good artist and storyteller. :)
Thankyouu. ^^ Yes I admit the level of my art is not striking. :( Actually I do want to take classes on flash but I can't because I have to focus more on my studies. :( So I have no choice but to use everything I have and create this because the story keeps on bothering me. Haha. But thank you very much on your advice. ^^
The music is catchy, although a little piercing, but still catchy! Cute story, and great hand animations.
I wanted to hate this but I kept watching and am a little happier for it. :)
The only picky thing I have to say is the black lines on his fur are a bit distracting. I think the llama could do without it. Otherwise, fun video!
those darn black lines arghhh, but thankss
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